Feedback Sheet 1

What are the strengths of the proposal? The proposal is good as it makes it clear what it is you plan to do and allows me to understand the story and how you plan to create the graphic elements of it. I think the story sounds interesting as does the ways in which you have decided to create it using the illustration and collages.

What are the weaknesses of the proposal? I think that a little more detail could’ve been included in the proposal. Things like the audience profile could’ve been more specific and in detail.

What are the strengths of the generation of ideas? The existing products mind map shows images and themes that have given you inspiration and make it easy to see where you have used influences from them to shape your own work. The Kate Crackernuts mind map is very good and shows how you have planned the story page by page explaining what you will show on each one from the text to graphical elements of them. The last slide shows the style of images, text and speech bubbles you wish to use. The hand drawn style looks very good I think and you can see all the elements you wish to use in the last slide from font to colour schemes.

What are the weaknesses of the generation of ideas? A few more images could have been used in the mood board to show what sort of images you wish to draw inspiration from.