Feedback Sheet 3

What are the strengths of the proposal? The strengths of the proposal is that she has thought about the timeframe we have to create the products by only choosing to do a specific part of the story. She is also using two different ways to create the novel which highlights some of her skills

What are the weaknesses of the proposal? When asked about the target audience, there was no explanation as to why that age was chosen.

What are the strengths of the generation of ideas? The mind maps are really good, especially the first one as it contains a mood board as well which gives of a range of ideas. Making two separate mind maps is a good idea as it not only gives ideas about graphic novels but shows off detail of the story she has chosen to use.

What are the weaknesses of the generation of ideas? The mood board at the end isn’t very detailed, it only gives very basic detail of the things she plans to use or inspire her story on.